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Archivist of Selay’uu’s Journal: Textiles?

23 Monday Jun 2014

Posted by erinkenobi2893 in Tales from Selay'uu, Tales of a Wandering Bard, Uncategorized

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battlefield of the soul, bbc merlin, bbc sherlock, healthcare jokes, lord of the rings, politics, selay'uu, sick, star wars, sweaters

“Sherlock, I want my blazer back.”

“Too late, I’ve already experimented on it.”

“Ah-choo!”

It’s kind of odd, I think, how a full-grown man can have such a demure sneeze. Even if he is half Elf. (Full-blooded Elves don’t sneeze, in the first place. And let me tell you, there is nothing more annoying than an immortal hovering around you, solicitously cheerful, when you are sick as a dog. Except bad health care plans.) Almost more amazing is how such a simple, demure, retiring sound can so swiftly attract the attention of Sherlock’s Boswell…

“Sherlock! You shouldn’t have dissolved the blazer in acid, or whatever it was you were doing. Now Obi-Wan has a cold–and from the sound of it, the beginnings of either bronchitis or…” Obi-Wan coughed again. “…possibly pneumonia, or laryngitis. Most likely laryngitis.” John finished.

I had heard enough. Dropping my pen and freezing the screen so nobody could mess up my work, I hurried out of my room and threw my big blue robe around Obi-Wan’s shoulders. The sleeves don’t look quite as long on him as they do on me–his shoulders are broader than mine–but the length is a bit too long for him. The hem of the cloak trails on the ground even when I’m wearing it–it doesn’t just trail, it pools. The fleece lining always comes in handy, in my opinion.

And that’s why at six p.m. last night, I was helping Gaius and John take care of our resident Jedi Master. (It’s also why Battlefield of the Soul has been delayed so long. Sorry…)

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Bound to the Flame, Chapter IV, Part II

12 Thursday Jun 2014

Posted by erinkenobi2893 in Bound to the Flame, Tales of a Wandering Bard

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battlefield of the soul, bound to the flame, shifting tides, star wars, story dynamics, writer trouble

Hello, once again. It has come to my attention that Bound to the Flame has been a bit neglected recently. (As has Battlefield of the Soul, but don’t fear, Shifting Tides fans… it’s under construction. Big-time re-working of the central sequences, which is a pain in the neck, but there you are.) So, without further ado, here is the next chapter of Bound to the Flame!

Bound to the Flame

Chapter VI

Part II

                Margery felt slightly uneasy, going as she was alone into the Ertraian sector of the camp, but no one stopped her to question her. The tall woman, who had come to fetch Rowan earlier—Rheadwyn, as Margery had heard her called—gave her a friendly smile that was not clouded by her deeply scrutinizing gaze. Her wild dark eyes seemed to pierce the depths of Margery’s soul in an uncanny way, but the eyes were kind and htough Margery felt as if her entire mind had been laid bare, she did not feel uneasy.

Summoning her courage, Margery actually smiled and waved at some of the people as she passed. They would generally smile and wave back at her. Occasionally someone would pass, bent too intently one some urgent errand to notice the Arethwyne princess, but in general the Ertraians seemed to be courteous and friendly. Margery felt her spirits lifting. She stopped the next person she came across, a tall, stocky man with a dark brown beard, to ask for directions.

“Excuse me,” she said politely. The man beamed down at her.

“Aye, lass?” he replied.

“Can you point me toward the encampment of Clan Caerlen? I’m looking for someone named Taryn…” The man laughed.

“Caerlen? You’re in the midst of it right now, lass. Taryn’s the attendant of the royal family—you’ll likely find her in the tent just off the great pavilion. If not, she may be with the Queen.” Margery thanked the man and made her way toward the great pavilion that he had pointed out as he was speaking. She admired the Ertraian craftsmanship on all the tents she passed. All were well-made, and occasionally beautifully embroidered as well. Outside some of the tents were piled weapons—bows, spears, a sword or two leaning here and there against a tent pole. They were all beautifully crafted, elegant weapons, beautifully deadly, even the simple spears. Margery remembered the carved staff Rowan used to aid him in getting about. She wondered if it had been made for Rowan by one of his two foster brothers. At last she arrived at the great pavilion. It was only differentiated from the other tents and pavilions in the Caerlen encampment by the border with the Ertraian arms worked into it on the tent, and the banner that had been planted beside it and waved gently in the afternoon breeze. The tent itself was no larger or finer than the other tents, save for its simple decoration, and Margery would have never imagined that it was the royal tent at all, unless it had been pointed out to her in the way it had been.

Here, Margery turned aside, toward the other tent pitched beside it. She moved to push the flap aside quietly, then hesitated. “Taryn?” she asked softly.

“Come in,” a quiet, lilting voice called. Margery brushed aside the tent flap and entered.

Taryn was an extremely beautiful, small, fragile-looking woman, with dark hair and eyes. She reminded Margery of a wild bird, with her darting eyes and half-skittish, courteous manner. Taryn was approaching middle age, and was probably not native Ertraian, as threads of sliver were beginning to snake, sinuous and elegant, through her austere, neat bun. She might not age as the Ertraians did, but she wore her age regally. Taryn was stroking the tousled blond head of the boy who was the object of Margery’s search.

“I was looking for Adyn. He ran away from Rowan,” Margery said. Taryn looked solemn.

“You found him,” she murmured. Margery looked down at the little boy, who had obviously cried himself out until he slipped into a deep sleep, with his head resting in his mother’s lap. Taryn seemed slightly worried. Margery searched the older woman’s face.

“Why are you upset?” she asked, trying her best to sound compassionate rather than curious. Taryn shrugged.

“My sun just—presumably—argued with his guardian, and certainly ran away from him. Why should I not be upset? I think that such a failing merits worry, does it not?”

“It’s more than just that, though,” Margery guessed. “There’s something else troubling you.” Taryn hesitated for a long moment, studying Margery, then she nodded.

“Yes. Yes, Princess, there is another reason for my concern.” Taryn took a deep breath. “Every generation, the leaders of the White Council choose a Champion—someone to speak for them, to fight for them, to defend the people, to act as their liaison. Halbryn, our King, is the current Champion, and when Rowan was young there was great hope that he would be able to succeed his father as Champion. You see, a Champion is more than just a warrior, your highness. He speaks with the people as the Council’s voice, defends the kingdom from threats without and within. He or she defends the kingdom from dark wizards and corruption. He or she is the last line of defense against evils that come from the misuse of magic, and attacks from the occult. We all thought that surely Rowan would be our strong defender. He would be more than just a king. He would defend the people of Ertraia, protect them from threats from every source. He would keep watch and prevent the Dark from rising. We thought that he would be the Champion, almost completely assuredly, because of what he is.”

“What he is?” Margery repeated, confused.

“Your highness, not only is Rowan the most gifted child to be born in human memory, but he is also the last of the Amatane Wielders. He is the most powerful Wielder in the world, perhaps in all of history. He has the most raw talent Melilana and Halbryn have ever seen, and they often meet with the parents of magic-gifted children in order to offer them support and guidance. But his power of Amatane goes farther than mere magical ability. The Amatane does not run in any bloodline; it is completely unpredictable who will be born with it. It is considered among the most dangerous abilities, and it can not be learned. Among other powers, legend says that the Amatane had the power to cut off any Wielder from their powers, perhaps even permanently, and they could drain the magic, even the life itself, from any living being. The Rangers were once mostly Amatane; all the children who were observed to have this power were very carefully trained, to preserve the safety of all those in the kingdom, and almost every known Amatane became a Ranger. The Rangers were the secret guardians of Ertraia and the protectors of all the innocent. They served the Council in secrecy; they were the White Council’s fist, the bulwark against attack. They protected the innocent. Under the Council’s orders, if an evil magic user was too set in his ways for redemption, they drew his claws. The dark magicians lived in fear of them. Rowan is the first Amatane to be born in recent history. Unfortunately, this also means that he has had no one to guide him in the use of his powers. We must trust in Rowan, that he will be able to control them without a guide.

“Rowan does not know yet that he has the Amatane, but the Queen recognized the signs at once. Since I cared for Rowan when he was at his lowest ebb, I had to know as well. I had to be cautious at all times, to watch for certain signals, in case his powers were becoming active. If I touched him at such a time, he might unintentionally suck the life force out of me. We have kept the fact that he is Amatane secret for two reasons. The first is because, did Rowan know of this power before the time came, he would tear himself apart inwardly for having so destructive an ability. The second is because of the Amatane sect of the Dark Druids. While most of the Druids were peaceable negotiators and keepers of the peace, or great military strategists, or political leaders, the Dark Druids sought the power to dominate. One of their sects stole Amatane children and raised them to use their powers against all who opposed them. Thus, since the Rangers were secret, most people associated the Amatane with the Dark Druids. We have had to keep Rowan’s powers a secret to protect him. We can only hope that, with Halbryn’s training and Melilana’s mental disciplines, he will be able to control the Amatane.” Margery looked slowly at Taryn. The woman gave her a stern glance.

“Mind, I am only telling you this because the Queen wished for you to know. She feels that you may be able to help her son, and you may need this knowledge as well.” Her voice softened slightly. “I hope you will be able to help the boy. I remember holding him when he was naught but a babe.” She sighed. “God raises up champions to do His will and protect His people in times of danger, but poor Rowan—he will never grow into his birthright, and if he had how terrible it might have been for him!

“When Rowan was injured, I cared for him. Adyn was chosen to take Rowan’s place as prospective guardian. It is hard to judge which of them is the more gifted, though Rowan is certainly the more disciplined. They were put back the twelve years Rowan is older, and all the boy’s training as well. I fear Adyn may not be ready in time…”

“Since Rowan is so gifted,” Margery said slowly, choosing her words with caution, “does it not mean now that the danger is greater than ever before?” Taryn sighed.

“Yes. We fear that the Dark is rising again. We’re not sure what we’ll do without him.”

 

Rowan struggled against the violent storm that he was trying, valiantly, not to feed. He gasped in mental pain as lightning fizzed through the air around him. Rain splattered down, with a few hailstones thrown in for good measure. The wild storm was growing still, bending Rowan to the breaking point.

Before him, the maelstrom was even more intense. The hooded, mist-shrouded figure held a knife. It was standing behind Halbryn, who stood perfectly still, unaware. The figure was waiting for just the right moment to pounce, Rowan could feel it. Another black crow swept down from the sky, and the figure leaped forward. “No!” Rowan screamed.

Melilana leaned heavily on the post that she had been chained to, sobbing, alone. Rowan reached out to her, instinctively, but she was as shadowy and incorporeal as the bats that thronged overhead, as slippery and impossible to grasp as the storm itself. Rowan looked down, tears blurring his eyes. When he looked up again, the vision had vanished.

Suddenly, he found himself looking into two blank white eyes that stared emptily at him out of a mist. Rowan found himself appalled, yet at the same time drawn in. The eyes were apparently blind, but horrible, seeing by some machination other than sight, repelling, yet impelling. Terribly blank, yet full of something Rowan did not recognize and instinctively shied from. Horribly familiar…

Rowan jerked away from the vision. The world tilted again, as if a portal had been opened to another plane, and Rowan found himself staring at himself—faint, ghostly, but taller, straighter; the other Rowan’s hand rested lightly on the pommel of a sword rather than gripping a staff with a death grip until his knuckles were white. The two Rowans stared at each other. The moment stretched out. The other Rowan did not look at him with pity, merely bland, inoffensive curiosity. A familiar furrow drawn between dark brows as the wind slid dark locks across pale temples. It was as if they were each trying to tell the other something, but were on opposite sides of a deep rift, out of which a dark mist was slowly rising to the heavens, an impenetrable wall, uncrossable by sound or breath, only by paling vision. Soft, pale mist rolled slowly around them, the breeze swirling it into fantastic shapes. The crippled Rowan felt strange, immaterial, as if he was staring at his own reflection in a swirled-glass mirror, such as hung on the wall just within the great hall of the castle in Ertraia, back home, a constant reminder that we are rarely as we see ourselves. Identical dark-golden tawny eyes met. Rowan felt a twist in his stomach, almost a wrench, as he looked at his uninjured, uncrippled double. An odd buzzing throb echoed behind his temples, and he choked back a sob. It hurt to see what might-have-been with such harsh, painful clarity. The mist blew slowly past them, obscuring the other Rowan from sight for a moment. When the mist cleared, Rowan was alone in the ancient circle, and for once, it was quiet—not quiet in the sense of lack of sound, for the only sound there had been the entire time was a soft whistling of the wind through the stones, but a quiet in the currents of time and space, a simple lack of motion, save the soothing drift of leaves and the occasional movement of some small animal, for miles around. More wondrous still was the lack of mental noise. Due to the disturbance—the mad gyrations—in the wild currents below the surface of the visible world, Rowan had not experienced true mental quiet and peace in his mind in some time. There was no background white noise attacking his senses, spiritual or physical; no aching pound of incipient visions against his temples, no prickle of uncanny, poignant intuition at the nape of his neck. The throbbing, twisting motion of the elder magic still flamed through the harsh currents, but it seemed that it had lost interest in him. Rowan fell to his knees, feeling drained, but at least—for once since they had arrived at the Cremlegged—his head felt completely clear. He could sense, now, that Adyn had never been here, and for that he was grateful. The boy had a lot of magical potential, but no control. Simply put, being here would have been overtly not safe for Adyn, for the most basic of reasons: the boy would have been a danger to himself. Even Rowan had been overwhelmed, and he was far older and much better trained.

Suddenly, a sudden wrench pulled at him—not before his eyes, but in his mind. An image appeared—Julian was sleeping peacefully, then a hand descended and snatched him suddenly away. Rowan snapped upright. Now, he could put a name to his fear. He had misattributed it to the peril of the Cremlegge itself, but now he knew that his unease had not been due to the power of the Cremlegge—which, if anything, had seemed to favor him rather than attempt to destroy him—but due to some presence of evil undetected. A traitor? It seemed impossible, but it was a possibility—though ugly—that he could not ignore. However, for now, an intruder seemed far more likely.

Julian was in danger.

                Rowan rushed off, back to the camp.

Battlefield of the Soul, Chapter IV

09 Friday May 2014

Posted by erinkenobi2893 in Battlefield of the Soul, Shifting Tides Series, Tales of a Wandering Bard

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battlefield of the soul, star wars, star wars week, stories in progress

Hello, everyone! This chapter has been such a bear to write, but hopefully it will be enjoyable, and the rest of the story will be easier from now on. 🙂

Also, I apologize for not posting something for Star Wars week yesterday. If need be, I’ll go overtime to make it up to all of you. 🙂

Enjoy!

Warnings: None in particular.

Chapter IV
Anakin seemed to be walking in a field of twilight. It was empty, and cold, and he was alone.
You don’t seem to understand what’s at stake here, child. The voice was… different. It seemed to come from everywhere and nowhere.
“Who are you? Where am I?” Anakin shouted back.
Don’t you know this place?
“How can I? I’ve never been here in my life before!”
And yet, you’ve been here your entire life. Anakin turned to find something solid, something concrete. There was nothing.
Anakin, you must fight! You must fight the evil! Anakin fled. He didn’t know where he was running to, but he did know what he was running from. And he was too terrified to meet it face to face. He ran and ran without thinking of stopping. He didn’t dare to look back at the thing behind him. He knew it was following, silent, unseen, inexorable, beyond the senses, yet at the same time, horribly there, horribly present, horribly real. Anakin swallowed and ran harder. He thought he could hear Obi-Wan’s voice in his head—Anakin, it will not catch you if you fight it! You must fight your fear! Anakin! But the voice was only an illusion, only a dream. He ran harder.

Obi-Wan woke suddenly from a restless, disturbed half-sleep he had never meant to take. He could feel the disturbance in the Force around him, as tangible as a hard, metallic smell in the evening air. The air was tight with roiling potential energy, as through a storm was brewing. Slowly, he rose to his feet, wondering why no one had bothered to start their joint journey yet. The ship was silent, still, dark. Obi-Wan went to check on Anakin and Shmi.
After the rest, brief as it had been, and agitated, he felt much better. A nearly-instinctive healing trance had worked its magic on his injury, and it had begun to heal already. Obi-Wan thoughtfully turned his mind on Ventress, the apprentice he had—even if unintentionally—left behind. He had to rescue her, somehow, and soon. The mercuric temperament of the Dathomirian girl would dispose her to rapid, bitter despair, if she was not rescued soon.
There was a bitter wind blowing through the Force. He could feel it. There was an east wind coming, and many things would wither under its harsh and breathless blast, leaving only the things that could endure, that could last. And nothing, no matter how strong, lasted forever. Palpatine’s actions—his own existence—they rattled the foundations of the Sith Empire, threatening to topple it. And if his mere existence was worth so much, then what could he do… when he really set his mind to it? The thought was staggering, frightening, even.
Shmi was sleeping, peacefully, it seemed, but Obi-Wan could sense the foggy, murky inner turmoil behind feeble natural shields. He sent a soothing breath to her, and she relaxed. Obi-Wan moved on.
Anakin was not in his bunk. Despite the apparent peace of the moonlit, mysterious, magical, still night, Obi-Wan’s growing, nagging unease blossomed into a sharp prick of lucid, almost painful alarm. Something in the Force—something inside him in answer—screamed a warning half a second before a shuddering yet powerful whirlwind of hate caught Obi-Wan and hurled him backward, against the wall. Against the ringing in his ears, Obi-Wan struggled through the haze of his own half-stunned intellect and scrambled to his feet. Still trying to regain his balance, he chased off after the fleeing boy.

It was early in the morning when Ninane found herself pounding down the hallways of the Imperial Palace, disturbing the few who were already awake, perhaps even awakening a few of those who were not. She paused in front of the entrance to Dooku’s quarters, trying to improve her haphazard appearance, but before she had finished, the door opened of its own accord and Dooku’s deep voice rolled majestically out to meet her. “Enter.”
Swallowing hard, Ninane stepped into the quarters, an elegant and impressive antechamber and study with the bedroom hidden at the back. Ninane slowly tiptoed into the room, feeling very small, insignificant, and frightened. Dooku might pretend familiarity with her, but she knew her place far too well to offer it in return, and here, on the Sith Lord’s turf, she was reminded yet again of her own lowliness. In her own laboratory, she might offer objections, but here, in the inner sanctum of the Sith, she could not even raise a hand to defend herself if attacked, unless Dooku willed it.
Dooku was already up and dressed immaculately, not a hair out of place, despite the early hour. Ninane swallowed as he turned to face her. “Ah, Ninane. I trust you have the test results I wanted?” Ninane swallowed again.
“Yes, my lord. But I think they must be impossible.” She handed the print-off sheet that she had obtained from the computer to Dooku, who perused it.
“Over 20,000—too high to accurately test, in fact?” Dooku said, one silver eyebrow raised. Ninane swallowed, a third time.
“Yes, my lord. I wasn’t sure what it was, a malfunction or a mis-calibration, or if it was something else, so I brought it to you…” she babbled, her words falling away as she realized that Dooku was looking at her.
“It was undoubtedly a malfunction,” he replied. “A midichlorien count that high is impossible.” Ninane gulped and bowed.
“I can re-calibrate the equipment and bring back an accurate count before this evening,” she offered, tremulously.
“No need,” Dooku said in his sonorous voice. “The matter is of no importance, after all.” Ninane heaved a sigh of relief. “Of course, you will keep this confidential,” Dooku continued, authoritatively. Ninane bobbed her head hurriedly.
“Yes, my lord, of course,” she said. Dooku’s smile was thin and knifing as a cold wind blowing shards of ice before it.
“I have no doubt you will,” he said.

 

Making Promises (And Breaking Them)

29 Tuesday Apr 2014

Posted by erinkenobi2893 in Story Dynamics, Uncategorized

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battlefield of the soul, c.s. lewis, fahrenheit 451, pet peeves, ray bradbury, the chronicles of narnia

Once more, Erin has returned to make her comments on writing, editing, and society in general. This time, I want to talk about the promises we make while writing. Liam of This Page Intentionally Left Blank commented on this in his posts Squids, on how if you do not keep the unspoken promises you make to a reader the reader will be mad at you, Chapter Promises, in which he states that every statement that ends a chapter is a promise (that the story will continue to follow along the line it takes at the end of the chapter), and Promises, about breaking faith with a reader. I am commenting on a similar phenomenon: unresolved promises. This is partly to address the phenomenon of unfinished, partially-posted fanfics that are then abandoned, temporarily or (gasp!) occasionally permanently (sadly, I’m partially guilty of this–I still haven’t worked on Battlefield of the Soul any time recently!), and partly to address the disturbingly common problem of loose ends in popular fiction.

It could only happen on the internet. A story is being posted serially. Maybe it’s not even fanfiction (though this occurrence is the bane of the fanfic realm.) It gets abandoned, or left on a permanent hiatus. This really, really annoys me when something like this happens, and even more so when it’s an original story that’s been left hanging. I can understand why someone would need to stop writing fanfiction for a time (maybe even permanently,) but I can’t get why someone would start posting an original story, poetry series, whatever, and then suddenly stop writing it.

I’m sorry, people, but this is majorly taboo. If you post something that’s a promise that you will continue to post it until it’s completed. (My bad on Battlefield of the Soul, people.) It’s not a spoken promise, it’s an implied one, but that doesn’t make it any less binding. So… FINISH WHAT YOU’VE BEGUN! If you’re just going to abandon it, why in the name of purple pickups did you start to post it?! People are just going to hate you for stopping.

And now, for the other problem.

Mystery promises resolution. To give any less would be to short-change one’s readers, alienating them in the process. Too often, authors leave ends untied and lying around. Untidy, and it bothers me.

For instance, there’s the matter of Clarisse in Fahrenheit 451, by Ray Bradbury. We never learn what really happen to her. The author stated in the commentary on the play and movie that he feels he should have specified in the book that she joined the refugees in the hills, as it was specified in the stage production.

And then there’s a similar instance in The Lion, the Witch and the Wardrobe, by C.S. Lewis. Lewis noted that he had received many letters from his readers, wanting to know what happened to the party-goers whom the White Witch turned to stone. He wrote,

I assumed that my readers would think that Aslan changed them back, as he did with all the other stone animals. I guess I should have written it into the story.

Save yourself from regrets, my fellow writers, and check your writing for loose ends. Your audience will thank you in the long term, no matter how annoying this may be in the short.

Thanks for reading, and God Bless!

Battlefield of the Soul, Chapter III

20 Friday Dec 2013

Posted by erinkenobi2893 in Battlefield of the Soul, Shifting Tides Series, Tales of a Wandering Bard

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alternate universe, battlefield of the soul, insanity, panic attacks, shifting tides series, small rants, star wars, stories in progress

Hi! I’m back again, and here’s the next chapter. (Please, please, please give me some feedback on this one–I need the inspiration–continuation is proving difficult. As in, I don’t have another full chapter to post after this one!!! Chances of survival: Over four million to one. :-P)

This chapter: Dooku grows curious, an escape, a rescue attempt, and a failure. May the Force be with you (and the same to me, I sure need it…)

Chapter III

                Dooku walked into the med center, nodding to the receptionist as he did so. He made his way into the lab, curtly acknowledging the technician. He handed her the blood sample he had obtained earlier, while Kenobi was being interrogated.

“Ninane. I need a run-down on this blood sample. The midichlorien count is the most important thing.” Ninane sighed, shrugging.

“I’m sorry, my lord. The equipment is off-line—it won’t be until tomorrow that I can get it back to you.” Dooku gave no sign of irritation.

“Very well,” he shrugged off-handedly. “Time is not an object, as long as I get the midichlorien count.” With that, he left.

 

The sun had set hours ago, and the confines of the Imperial Palace had quieted somewhat. Obi-Wan’s eyes shot open, and he raised himself from the bed where he had laid down an hour ago, until the night gathered and worked its magic. Carefully, he took a long knife that he had sharpened before lying down from its hiding place beneath the mattress, and steeled himself. Taking a deep breath, he cut his upper arm, touching the slave transmitter and flicking it out with a combination of the knife point and the Force, to keep it from activating. He slid it under the mattress and bandaged the wound as best as he could. That done, he slipped out of his room and went to Shmi and Anakin’s quarters. The door slid open silently. The Skywalkers were prepared and waiting.

“Come on!” he wshipsered, grabbing the bundle out of Shmi’s arms, as the exited the quarters. “Hurry!” he hissed. “It’s already late. We have to go!” Silently, they rushed down the deserted corridors of the palace.

Suddenly, Obi-Wan froze. “Wait…”

“Come on! Hurry!” Anakin said, rushing forward.

“No, Anakin, wait!” Obi-Wan cried, leaping after Anakin, grabbing at the collar of the boy’s shirt. Too late. The two of them barreled together into a patrol of the royal guards.

Obi-Wan grabbed Anakin and hit the ground with the boy underneath him, shielding him with his body. The first barrage of their fire spent, the guards retreated momentarily. Obi-Wan leaped to his feet, kicking out, his boot connecting solidly with the targeted guard’s jaw, felling him, as the young warrior struck another smoothly in the stomach with the same motion. In an impressive display of martial arts lasting for the next thirty seconds or so, the remainder of the guards were all on the ground, unconscious. Obi-Wan flicked his hair back out of his eyes. “We should go. We still haven’t—” He swayed. “We haven’t even picked up Ventress yet.” He hurried them along at a brisk pace. Shmi moved quickly to his side.

“Ventress?” she asked. Obi-Wan nodded.

“We’re taking her with us.” Suddenly, the young man clutched at his side, his footsteps faltering a little.

“Are you all right?” Shmi asked, concerned.

“Fine,” Obi-Wan managed, cheerfully. He staggered. Shmi was almost scared now.

“Obi-Wan, you’re not ‘fine’,” she said.

“I’ll be okay—we have to get Ventress, and go!” They ran on for a bit, then Obi-Wan suddenly fell, without a cry or gasp or any other sound. Shmi gasped.

“He’s been shot!” she said, fingers ghosting over the burn mark on the fabric of Obi-Wan’s tunic.

“Let’s get him to the ship!” Anakin exclaimed, grabbing one of the unconscious Jedi’s arms and struggling in an attempt to pull him onward.

“But what about Ventress?” Shmi wanted to know.

“There’s no time. Let’s go!”

Shmi did not notice, as they lifted Obi-Wan’s unconscious form, the odd, unnatural yellow tinge in her son’s eyes.

 

When Obi-Wan did not come for her, Ventress began to worry. Her overactive imagination supplied myriads of macabre images of the daring young Jedi found out—captured—tortured—killed. She waited an hour—an hour and thirty minutes—after curfew.

Still no sign of her would-be rescuer.

Taking a deep breath, Asajj hurried out into the corridor. No sign of Obi-Wan anywhere. Swiftly, Asajj searched all the relevant corridors. Still there was no sign of Obi-Wan.

Asajj rushed to the private hangar of the palace. She got there just in time to see a sleek corvette lift off the pad and take off. Her desperate waving and shouts went unheeded. The ship made for space, quickly disappearing into the distance.

Asajj stood, frozen to the spot, for several long minutes, feeling betrayed. Then, sadly, she turned and retraced her steps to her room.

There would be no rescue for her.

She had been left behind.

 

Somehow, between the two of them, they somehow managed to get Obi-Wan on board a spaceworthy craft and take off. As soon as they were a safe distance from Coruscant’s busy airspace, Anakin set the coordinates for a small Outer Rim planet in the middle of nowhere. As the ship made the jump to hyperspace, Obi-Wan blinked, opened his eyes. Shmi hurried to his side, concern coloring her voice.

“Obi-Wan? Are you all right?” she asked. “Other than the obvious, are you hurt?”

“I think I’m all right… What happened?” Obi-Wan groaned, holding his injured side.

“You were injured. We had to get you on board here as quickly as we could.” Shmi replied.

“What about Asajj?” Obi-Wan asked. “Did you find her? Is she here?”

“I’m sorry, Obi-Wan…” Shmi turned away slightly. Obi-Wan felt a sinking, sickening sensation in the pit of his stomach.

“And?” he prompted.

“I’m sorry,” Shmi repeated. Obi-Wan grabbed her arm.

“Please, Shmi. You have to tell me!” he urged.

“When you were injured,” Shmi began, “we thought it would be best to go as quickly as possible. I didn’t want to, but Anakin was worried about you…”

Obi-Wan put his head in his hands. “Oh, no,” he breathed. “It’s back.”

“What’s back?” Shmi asked, suddenly afraid. “What do you mean?”

“Vader. Anakin’s selfish, twisted side,” Obi-Wan replied, darkly. Shmi frowned.

“I thought he had it under control,” she said.

“He still has not learned control,” Obi-Wan ground out. “He needs more time, which is something we don’t have much of right now.” He gingerly probed the wound. “It’s not that bad,” he said, cautiously. “I must have gone into shock.” Even Jedi were not immune to the ravages of an over-reacting body. Obi-Wan stood, carefully checking his balance before he fully trusted himself to it. “Where are we headed?” he asked.

“Nagr, I think,” Shmi replied. “I’m not sure.”

“I’ll go ask Anakin,” Obi-Wan said, walking with surprising steadiness toward the cockpit. Shmi hurried after him.

“Wait… are you sure that’s such a good idea? You’re injured!” she exclaimed, unheeded.

 

Obi-Wan entered the cockpit. “Anakin,” he said softly.

“Yes, Master Obi-Wan?” Too prim, too smooth, too calm. Obi-Wan was instantly on his guard.

“Where are we going?” he asked deliberately. Anakin’s eyes shifted slightly to his left as he replied.

“I don’t know. We were in a hurry to get you away.” Obi-Wan leaned down against the center console, his weight on the heels of his hands, intentionally invading Anakin’s personal space.

“Don’t lie to me, Vader,” he said, purposefully. “I know that’s not Anakin talking. What’s your ugly little game?”

“Kenobi,” the Dark Side hissed. Obi-Wan gathered the light around himself, flinging all that he could muster at it. It vanished, but Obi-Wan knew that it was only temporarily routed, not permanently put to flight. The soft wisps of light, seemingly weak yet startlingly resilient, that he had used to drive out the dark were already returning to him. He leaned forward and grasped Anakin’s shoulders.

“Anakin. Snap out of it. The Dark Side—you have to fight it, Anakin!” No response. Anakin appeared to be sleeping. Obi-Wan slowly released the boy’s shoulders.

He had a very bad feeling about this.

Battlefield of the Soul, Chapter II

17 Tuesday Dec 2013

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I kind of owe this to you for the delays, don’t I? Especially since the last chapter was so short… not my fault. It’s just the way this story is telling itself, I guess.

This chapter: Obi-Wan, Anakin, Shmi and Ventress make plans. Low angst levels–please tolerate ’em for the moment. 😉

Chapter II

                Alone now, Obi-Wan shuddered. His danger sense had been screaming beyond sound the whole time he had been speaking with Dooku, painful white lights flashing behind his eyes, a headache pounding in his temples. He hurried down the halls, his original destination forgotten, the errand ignored. He found the place where Ventress would be passing along, between training rooms, with the other prospective Sith, soon. He walked swiftly down the corridor, just as Asajj and her classmates were coming up it behind Kyrina, the Nightsister and Sith acolyte who was their floormaster. Passing through the midst of the unruly crowd at a swift walk, as if unaware of anything except his fictitious task, he collided purposefully with Asajj and fell, together with her, in a complex tangle, to the floor. Quickly, he whispered in her ear, “We’re going to escape tonight. Pass the word to Anakin. Details later.” Asajj didn’t even nod—the quick, unintentionally painful pressure of her elbow in his ribs was confirmation enough, without being dangerous. Struggling to his feet in an overtly ungainly manner, Obi-Wan calmly withstood the fearsome onslaught of Kyrina’s wrath, vanishing with extraordinary rapidity as soon as her verbal abuse was concluded. He hurried to find Shmi. Finding her in the kitchen, where she was peeling scalded tomatoes, he hurriedly pulled over a second pan of tomatoes and began to pop them neatly out of their loosened skins.

“They haven’t found Steela and brought her back?” he asked softly, glancing at the empty space in the kitchens. Shmi gave him the barest hint of a smile.

“No. She hasn’t been dragged back in chains yet. I think we can hope that she did get away clean after all.”

“I hope so. It’s been far too long since someone successfully escaped the palace. It will make the Sith’s heads spin when it happens twice in one week. We’re leaving tonight, Mother.” Shmi gasped quietly.

“I thought you said we weren’t going to go for some time yet—until you were absolutely sure that everything was ready.”

“I changed my mind. Dooku’s been showing some interest in me, and, well… the escape won’t go forward without me.”

“You’re right. We’d never manage to escape alone,” Shmi said softly. “I understand. I’ll be ready.” Tomatoes all skinned, Obi-Wan left the kitchens and delivered the message he had been running, albeit half an hour late. It earned him a brutal cuff about the ears, but he barely noticed it.

Tomorrow morning, it would all be done with, forever.

Battlefield of the Soul, Chapter I

16 Monday Dec 2013

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I’m sorry it’s taken so long, but it’s finally here! The first chapter of Battlefield of the Soul is finally complete. Again, I apologize for the long delay. I really didn’t think it would take nearly as long as it has.

All right, I have to give you a few notes before I post the chapter. First of all, this story proved to be much shorter than I had expected. Mostly, it’s about Dooku and his ideas, Obi-Wan’s struggle for freedom, and Asajj. But the biggest part of the story is Anakin’s fight with Vader, the Dark Side as it exists within himself. It’s more of a gap filler than anything else, because though it’s important, there’s actually not much action. It’s more like a character study, I think. Also, it’s turning out to be much more difficult to write and edit. The scenes from the next installment (which I have already begun to look forward to, and which will involve the utter awepicness of Jango Fett himself!) have proven much easier, for some reason. Normally, when I do a character sketch, it just flows. But now… it’s very frustrating!!!

Okay, on with the show. Just a caveat–mentions of torture in this chapter. Read with discretion. I hope you enjoy!

Chapter I

                “Siri, what are you doing?” Obi-Wan hissed. Siri riffled hurriedly through the papers. Obi-Wan swallowed, hard. Those could be death to both of them if anyone knew what was going on. He had already reported the important things… why did Siri have to make things worse like this? It was maddening. “Someone will come in and see you!” he continued, anxiously glancing around at the walls of Sidious’ makeshift office on Naboo.

                “Don’t worry, Obi-Wan,” Siri said, her voice still in that annoying tone that made her seem to think that she knew so much better than he did.

                She didn’t.

                Obi-Wan hissed out a colorful expletive and snapped, “Siri, get out of here! Sidious is coming!” Any espionage possibilities instantly forgotten, Siri leaped to her feet and dashed from the room.

                She almost collided with Sidious.

                Reflexively, Obi-Wan leaped forward in a sudden attack. “Run, Siri!” he shouted as he grappled with Sidious. The guards stood by, unsure of what to do, as Obi-Wan struggled with their emperor.

                “Get the girl!” Sidious shouted. The guards moved to comply. Obi-Wan Force-pushed them against the wall, a tangle of limbs and gaudy livery.

                By the time they managed to get to their feet, Siri was long gone.

                Obi-Wan managed to press Sidious to the ground, but the Sith wasn’t going to stay down for long. Obi-Wan felt his throat constrict as Sidious gripped him, through the Force. He dangled a few feet above the ground, struggling for breath. Sidious slammed him hard into a wall, then hurled the energy of his anger at the young man. Obi-Wan cried out, writhing, unable to defend himself.

                “So, what did you have to do with this, Korzu?” Obi-Wan struggled to breathe. The Sith lightning came down at him again. “Speak!”

 

Obi-Wan came back suddenly to harsh reality, burning agony searing a blazing, white-hot line across his vision. “The girl who escaped… had you seen her before?” Silence. It took Obi-Wan a moment to realize that Xanatos was addressing him. Don’t tell him. he thought. That could lead to giving away everyone’s safety. “Were you involved in her initial escape?” Don’t say anything. Don’t blow your cover. You’re no use to the Council revealed, or dead. If he really wants it, let him fish, and dive, and caper and grovel for it. I still won’t tell. “What role did you have in the escape of queen-elect Amidala?” Still stubborn silence. Xanatos paced the other way. “Who were your accomplices? Did they press you into service?” He walked slowly in an ever-tightening circle around Obi-Wan. “Did you witness the escape? What happened? How did they get past the guards?” A mere hitch in already ragged breathing, unreadable either way. Nothing more. “Why did you help the Jedi Tachi to escape? How did you know her name?” Obi-Wan silently cursed himself. Why had he spoken Siri’s name aloud? But the damage was already done and could not be undone. Do in haste, regret in leisure, the saying went. He had said her name in the heat of the moment, and he was paying for it now. Only one slip in a lifetime. The irony was palpable.

Qui-Gon’s worry seeped into his awareness. Their bond had been allowed to remain in place, due to the unusual circumstances, and the fact that Yoda had declared that their bond was far too strong to break. Obi-Wan sent a wordless reassurance across to him, along with an imperative to calm Siri and tell her not to worry. He would be fine, just as he always had been.

 

Sidious entered. Obi-Wan was too tired, his thoughts too disorganized, his body too weak, to even acknowledge the Sith Lord’s presence. “Well, my Prince,” Sidious said, with a cruel laugh. “Ready to talk, yet?” Obi-Wan raised his head slightly with an effort and stared defiantly into acidic yellow eyes. Liquid fire shot along his veins, melting every thought as it was formed, but he still did not cry out.

The Sundaga Sith Lord, Argwal, leaning over him, overlong, skeletal forefingers pressed against his temples. Obi-Wan shuddered and tried to pull away, but he was too weak, and every movement sent jolts of pain lancing through him. The Sundaga was nominally the head of interior security, but it really was the creature’s innate ability, enhanced by the Force, to tell exactly when to stop, when a single moment longer would kill him. “The pain would stop, if only you would let go of your pride and tell us what happened,” the Sundaga wheedled. Go to your own place, Sith, and I hope you enjoy the company, Obi-Wan thought, but he kept his thoughts to himself. He was too disoriented even to speak.

The blackness swirled up from the depths and swept him off into oblivion.

 

Dooku entered the cell, humming an aria from an opera. He glanced across the room, at the young man who hung in chains in its center. Dooku clicked his tongue in disapproval and disgust. The young man raised his head slowly, painfully, a dull flicker in his gray eyes the only acknowledgement of Dooku’s presence. “So, it comes to this,” Dooku said softly. Obi-Wan said nothing, all his energy focused on just staying conscious. “They tell me that you aided the escape of a Jedi. Why would you do such a thing?” Obi-Wan raised his head to see the hungry expression in Dooku’s dark eyes. He smiled a little, somewhat secret and somewhat mocking. Dooku seized his chin, forcing him to face him. “What have you to gain by your defiance?” Strange green eyes looked deep into his soul.

“What do I have to lose?” the young man replied. Dooku frowned, searching the boy’s curiously ancient eyes. The boy was stubborn, and different. Just along the edges of his Force-presence was a slight tang of something exotic, alien.

 

Time passed, and the questioning passed with it. Even the patience of Sith could be worn out by sheer fortitude. Obi-Wan returned to his ordinary duties, slowly, though it took what seemed like weeks to recover.

Qui-Gon was away on a mission and did not meet with him for a very long time. Things seemed to be going on much as usual, but Obi-Wan could not stifle the feeling of something about to happen. So things went on, time passed in the same way as it always had, but always with the growing feeling of unease.

 

Finally, things came to a head. Ventress had a spat with Luda, a much older initiate of the dark arts. And he himself… had to face Dooku.

 

“Well, well, well. If it isn’t my young philosopher friend.” Dooku’s deep voice echoed throughout the passage. Obi-Wan stopped and drew in a deep breath.

“Lord Tyrannus,” he said, not bothering to turn around. He could practically sense Dooku’s amusement—he was, evidently, the only one with such audacity as to address the Sith Lord by name. The older man smiled.

“Why so formal, all of a sudden? Surely the titles may be dropped among friends, young Kenobi.”

“Perhaps. But perhaps I don’t consider you a friend.” The sharpness in his tone was not lost on Dooku; neither were the implications of its sudden mutation into seriousness. “Why all the sudden interest in my friendship—in me? I’m only a slave. What do you want from me? What’s your ulterior motive?” Obi-Wan carefully stepped sideways, cautiously keeping his distance. Dooku stepped forward, backing him against the wall.

“You are, of course, too astute to miss that,” Dooku noted. “You are capable of avoiding the subject or being direct as you will, wrapping a bitter meaning in honeyed words, deflecting attention among the intelligent, drawing on the ignorant with the promise of nothing at all…” Obi-Wan ignored the stream of words, choosing to get to the point at once.

“Another distraction tactic,” he said shortly, not at all abashed.

“What is your ulterior motive, Obi-Wan?” Dooku asked.

“Survival.” Obi-Wan replied bluntly. Dooku raised an eyebrow.

“Self-preservation—a worthy cause.”

“Why are you here?” Obi-Wan asked, brusquely, half-hoping that this bold affront would deter Dooku from any more words than were absolutely necessary. Unfortunately, he knew that Dooku was too suave and too determined to be distracted by the ploy.

“Perhaps I only wished to have your friendship,” Dooku hedged.

“What if I’m too proud to accept it?” Obi-Wan asked, coldly.

“Then you’ll be far more foolish than I took you for at our first meeting,” Dooku said. Obi-Wan smiled dangerously, thinly, at the veiled insult, as the said hypothetical example was completely possible and more than likely, and they both knew it.

Except, it was not on pride but on principle that Obi-Wan refused Dooku’s friendship.

“Think of me as a fool, then,” he said, still smiling that perilous, thin, feral smile, and walked briskly away.

 

Left behind, Dooku smiled as well, a hungry, predatory smile. He knew very well what he was looking for. The boy was strong in the Force, and as the heir to the throne was in a strategic position—though Kenobi was defiant, he might in the future reconsider. Kenobi’s strong-willed determination was a setback, to be sure, but not a real difficulty. It made the coveted prize all the more desirable. Kenobi would be a pleasure to break. The accomplishment of Dooku’s goal was inevitable.

The young man, in the end, would join him, and together they would overthrow the usurper. And then… then it would resolve itself in the clever game of cat and mouse, in which only one could ever be left alive at the end. If it ended in his own death, Dooku didn’t mind. To train a worthy successor was enough for any Sith, honor and glory to last an eternity. Darth Bane had said it, and it was true.

Kenobi would be his.

Instant obsession, here we come!

10 Tuesday Dec 2013

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I’m back! Almost done with the first chapter of Battlefield of the Soul, too. ^_^

But apart from discovering a new emoticon (^_^), I now have a new obsession as well: Rise of the Guardians.

Now, I’ll be the first to admit that this was unexpected. Normally, when I see a movie, it takes a little while for love at first sight to turn into full-blown obsession, but this was not the case with Rise, for some reason. I have no idea why. Unless it’s the simple brilliance of taking well-known characters/fantasy figures and changing them subtly, making them deeper, more… more like the Elves from Tolkien, vs. the inane fairytale product, so that along with the innate beauty, there’s also peril and wonder, without which, beauty is simply sugary, insubstantial flutter-bys. (I said it. Deal with it, Disney. :-P)

Anyway, if you have not seen this movie, you may want to avoid reading parts of this post, which will probably inadvertently contain spoilers.

First of all, there’s Santa Claus (North.) He’s Russian. Yeah… but it kind of makes it interesting, in context. (Even though St. Nicholas was really from Turkey! And Babushka is the real-life Russian version of Santa.) He takes the writing-on-one’s-hand thing a bit further–the naughty and nice lists are written out on his left and right forearms, respectively (if you watch close in the movie, you can actually see a scene where he wipes one of the names off the naughty list!) Another thing–he is HUGE. As in, 6’7 and broad-shouldered to boot. Oh, and the yetis make the toys (not the elves!) Does that surprise you?

Then, there’s the Tooth Fairy. She’s the only female Guardian, and also the only one who does not have any visible weapon that we actually see in the movie. Sure, there are a couple times where you see her taking on the Nightmares, but those are normally wide shots, and when they’re not, she seems to be using one of the Easter Bunny’s boomerangs. Maybe she’s just a master of hand to hand combat? The world may never know…

Next up, the Easter Bunny. Set aside your perceptions of fuzzy fluff, mates. This bunny means business. In fact, were it not for the consistent references to “bunnies” and “rabbits,” I would have thought that he was really a hare. (SPOILER ALERT! Though, this was sort of almost-debunked by one scene in the movie, which was to my mind completely unnecessary, though cute–ish? Maybe?) It must be the ears… And the Bunny? He’s Australian. And gets called a kangaroo by a certain very disrespectful, white-haired imp.

Now, for the Sandman. The only Guardian who does not actually speak, but is none-the-less expressive, despite the fact that he has no voice actor. He is sort of like the Swiss-army-knife character–the one who can pull just about anything out of his hat, thanks to a semi-solid substance known as “dream sand.”

And then… there’s Jack Frost.

The outcast–the mischief-maker–the trickster character. The irresponsible, reckless, and somewhat-crazy one.

There’s one in every crowd, and Jack Frost does not disappoint. He’s the most non-conformist of all the characters, and while all the other Guardians are defined by their predictability (as in, Santa comes on Christmas Eve, the Easter Bunny turns up on Easter, the Tooth Fairy when you’re waiting with a tooth under your pillow, the Sandman when your mom says “sweet dreams!”), Jack is very much defined by being unpredictable. After all, who expects a blizzard or a snow day, or even artistic geometrical designs on their windows on a cold morning? Jack basically does as he pleases. And he’s also the most visible Guardian–if you believe in him, you can see him at work, while the others–they don’t particularly like to show themselves. Whereas Jack goes around setting off people’s car alarms.

Jack is also possibly the least confident of the Guardians. Due to amnesia before waking up as Jack Frost, he doesn’t really know who he is or even what he is, or what he is supposed to do in the world. Thus, he’s the least secure. He’s confident all right, to the point of overconfidence, but he doesn’t really understand what he’s meant to do or why he is a Guardian until late in the movie. And Pitch Black, the Bogeyman, uses this lack of confidence to try and sway Jack to his side–though we can surmise that Pitch only wants, by extension, to wield Jack’s power–and, to be honest, the boy is powerful. He actually destroyed legions of nightmares while enraged by the Sandman (Sandy’s) death, and then later admitted he didn’t know how he did it, for crying out loud!

Anyway, Jack is very much driven by wanting to be believed in, to stop being invisible and unheard. He doesn’t want to be just a metaphor, so to speak, and he wants to know why he was chosen to be a Guardian. But he doesn’t want to be used, and he doesn’t want to be feared by children, or to harm them. And that’s what saves him from Pitch, ultimately. And it’s Jack’s “center”–joy–that proves to be key in defeating Pitch.

Now, to talk a bit about Jamie, the little boy who helps Jack to realize what’s important in his “life.” Jamie is, I think, Jack’s anchor–the reason why he is fighting in the first place. Also, if you look closely, Jamie looks very much like a younger version of Jack (before his death and subsequent restoration to life as Jack Frost.) It is possible that Jack is, in fact, Jamie’s grand-uncle, removed by a few generations. Perhaps it’s likely. The filmmakers don’t specify–and to be absolutely honest, they don’t need to.

Jamie’s resemblance of younger Jack is only one of the visual references in the movie; there are, in fact, several. For instance, the crook of Jack’s staff appears to be topped with the same ornamental “G” shape that is the Guardians’ symbol. Then, there is the North Pole, and Santa’s workshop; the office seems to be a visual reference to Rivendell, in the Lord of the Rings movies. Then there is an ice-like substance, which does not seem to melt; North crafts the prototype toys out of it.

I don’t really understand some of the elements of the plot, however. For instance, I don’t understand why, when the Man in the Moon chooses Jack to be a Guardian, Jack doesn’t really begin to suffer the effects of not being believed in. Perhaps it’s because he hasn’t truly committed himself yet? And why, when all the other Guardians begin to lose their powers, does he remain the only character truly capable of combating Pitch? I guess it’s possible that the reason why Jack never had any real problems when no one believed in him (other than not really being believed in, of course), is because he wasn’t a Guardian yet. Besides, someone has to initiate things, don’t they?

Anyway, the real reason why Jack didn’t lose his powers when the others lost theirs is because the writers thought it would be “cool” to have Jack go up against Pitch… I think it’s more realistic (and far more interesting) that he sort of… lost.

Now, on to the other aesthetics of the movie. The visuals are supremely enchanting; for instance, the dream sand (and its nightmare counterpart), while seeming to originate as specks of sparkling gold (or black), forms itself into inchoate swirls or “vines”, can make shapes (such as dreams: unicorns, dinosaurs, dolphins, schools of fish; and communication media, which are Sandy’s main form of communication, other than rattling that poor elf’s brains out.) and solid items, such as a barnstorming plane for Sandy to ride in; whips, which are his chief weapon, and props, such as a funny little hat to tip; then there’s Pitch’s nightmares, which take the form of stylized black horses with malevolent gold eyes. Both forms of sand, though, seem to be capable of falling into their inert forms, in which they would appear to be normal, albeit beautifully-colored, alluring, and glittering, sand.

Then there’s the frost, which… *sighs wistfully* It’s hypnotic and mesmerizing, just watching it spread. The geometric patterns in it seem to demonstrate that Jack is a consummate artist, without even trying.

I can’t even begin to enumerate all the gorgeousness of the movie… so why should I try? Except in one other case; the huge book in which the Guardians’ Oath is recorded. What is it with me and huge old books?! (Some of you may recall me swooning likewise over the book of magic from BBC’s Merlin.)

As for the way the characters are portrayed–it’s hard to imagine them any other way. For instance, who would have imagined Bunny with gauntlets? But he has them and it’s just unbelievably cool-looking. And the Tooth Fairy is covered with iridescent feathers, but has insect-like wings, though you’d expect her to be a bit more like a hummingbird, seeing all the hovering she does. (The small fairies even have a long beak-like nose!) And North’s sleigh and reindeer–definitely not rickety. And Jack is a category all his own. When I first heard about the movie, I was kind of afraid he would make me think of Bruck Chun (a villain from the Jedi Apprentice series, who is platinum blond), but he really doesn’t come off that way at all. For one thing, Jack is smaller-boned and finer-featured than my mental image of Bruck, and Bruck also lacks the attitude (Bruck is more gloating, like a petty bully.) But that’s neither here nor there; what I’m thinking about is the portrayal. Jack’s face is very fine-featured indeed–in fact, on a few occasions when he was looking regretful or sad and had his hood up, it almost looked feminine. He has the sort of face you’d expect more from a manga or anime show than Western animation. But he’s clearly a teenaged boy (probably not older than fifteen or so,) and the way he walks and moves are different. And who would’ve expected a fifteen-year-old to have a more baritone voice already?! But, wonder of wonders, it works. Add the way he talks and expresses himself, and the character is very clearly masculine. Another wonder to be attributed only to the sound-enhanced motion picture.

What is it with thinner, slighter characters recently?! It used to be that a male hero would be tall and broad-shouldered, even if they were more lithe than muscular. But recently, there seems to be a trend toward more waifish-looking characters. For instance, there’s Violet in The Incredibles. Beside her dad, brother, and even her mom, she’s tiny. Then there’s Merlin, from the BBC show of the same name. He’s definitely smaller than Arthur, in the same show. And I won’t even mention Legolas (probably because he’s actually shorter than Aragorn… errm… never mind.)

Seriously, people?! What’s happened to all the hobbits?!

bilboOh… never mind.

Okay, so… I’m pretty much aware that probably no one read to the bottom of this post… except for Iris… and she likes anything and everything I write (misguided enthusiasm…) and has a crush on Bilbo… X-P

Thanks for reading (if you actually read all the way to the bottom) and God Bless!

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A New Hope (For The Hero’s Dream)

05 Thursday Dec 2013

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I’m sorry about the delay in posting the first part of Battlefield of the Soul. The clips and snatches I wrote it in have been uncommonly gnarly, and it’s becoming a character sketch for multiple of its enactors, so unfortunately it may take me a while to finish it. Apologies, once again.

However, on the bright side, now that National Novel Writing Month is over, I have taken up drawing once again. Still haven’t figured how to use that thingummybobbin (what a luscious word! I almost wish I was British at this rate. ;-P) that some Internet entities use to color their drawings on the computer, without struggling with colored pencils. So for now, I’m limited to line and shade, sadly… My drawing pad likes to smear, so when I do a sketch in pencil I have to either a) scan it in a hurry or b) ink the lines and erase the pencil. And that’s the same reason why I can’t color in these drawings by hand. (Sigh…)

And now, for you lovers of the Shifting Tides series, I have a special treat.

Obi-Wan's appearance in "The Hero's Dream" and sequels.

Obi-Wan’s appearance in “The Hero’s Dream” and sequels.

This is intended to be concept art, and I’m afraid… *cough* that in my opinion, it doesn’t look very much like Ewan McGregor at all… but it’s better than my former attempts. Sorry.

The tattoos are supposed to be blue, but since this was a bi-color sketch I wound up drawing them in black. The one that circles around under his left eye is the famed “Flame of Deriaka,” mark of the Royal House. The one on the forehead is a black orchid, meant to evoke the fleur-de-lis. It’s sort of the Sith version of it. (No apologies to any modern organization. The French monarchy copyrighted this first. Heehee.) And the one on the lower cheek is a bramble… rose among thorns… get it? ;-P

Anyway, so that’s my drawing of Obi-Wan as he appears in The Hero’s Dream. And my dad is kicking me off the computer to clean up.

Media: Pencil on sketch paper. I used my mechanical pencil with .5 mm leads. Believe it or not, art can be made from something mundane! 😉

Thanks for reading and/or browsing, and God Bless!

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Comes a Time

01 Sunday Dec 2013

Posted by erinkenobi2893 in Story Dynamics, Tales of a Wandering Bard, Uncategorized

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Yes! Erin is back at last from her long jaunt into Nanowrimo Nation. Did you miss me? 😉 Late happy Thanksgiving, everyone. 🙂

I have some news for all my beloved readers in this post. I have finished a concept drawing for The Hero’s Dream and other stories in the Shifting Tides series, as well as parts of the next installment of the series, Battlefield of the Soul. The concept drawing will be posted once I scan it into the computer (unfortunately, it’s black and white… sigh… Does anyone know how to use the program to color it in? *hint hint wink wink*), and the story will be posted as soon as I can type it up.

Also, I have a bunch of original short stories to post–I worked on them during Nano, sort of to fill up the gaps. 😉 I hope you all enjoy them!

Then, on Nano, I did not win… didn’t even make my wordcount goal. I do have two valid excuses, though: Jewel’s Birthday (Friday), and taking out the trash. Surprisingly, Thanksgiving wasn’t that much of a problem. Anyway, so I spent Jewel’s birthday with her, and the next day (the last day of Nano!) I was taking out the trash, and the garbage barrel lid came down and bopped me a good one across the back of the head, and my glasses fell off and landed in the trash can, and when I reached for them I cut myself on some broken glass, in the soft skin between my first and second fingers, at the knuckle. Ouch. So then I was bleeding like no one’s business, and it just hurt too freakin’ much to hold a pencil, much less type.

Soooo, here I am, 12k short, and still completely happy. Frankly, I’m not sure how this is even possible…

And I now have a cold. Figures…

And now, for the real juicy bit. Warning: Intense Christian doctrine and evangelization ahead! If some of you don’t like overtly Christian and/or Catholic writings, it might be best for you to simply avoid the rest of this post. However, if you are a lover of philosophy or C.S. Lewis or a fan of G.K. Chesterton (or simply just plain stubborn), you might just enjoy this (though of course my lowly work simply can not compare to either Lewis or Chesterton… or Tolkien for that matter.) That much said, enjoy or avoid at will! 😉

Comes a Time

                Arinna pulled the kettle off the stove, pouring the boiling water into a chipped, earth-toned ceramic carafe and tossing some tea leaves in on top. “What do you mean?” she asked, frowning slightly to herself.

“You’re going to die in this holy war and it isn’t even yours.” Lexi said. “How is that not…” She paused. Arinna sighed and put down the earthenware carafe.

“Do you mean to say that I’m going to die for a cause that is, in your opinion, both worthless, and already doomed to failure?” she asked bluntly. Lexi turned away, probably unused to such blunt, brash, plain honesty. It took her a moment—a very long moment—to regain her composure.

“Yes. I do.” she said at last.

“Well, let me ask you a question then,” Arinna said softly. “What do you believe in?” Startled again, especially since Arinna had broken the social rules twice in as many paragraphs, Lexi took a moment before she replied.

“I’m a Christian, too, just like you, you know that!” she protested.

“That means nothing,” Arinna said. “There are too many denominations nowadays for us to know for certain that we hold any common ground whatsoever. Besides, many people who say they believe in Christ don’t really love Him. If they did, then they would act like it. What do you believe in? What are you willing to fight and die for? If not Christ, then what?”

“I don’t know!” Lexi burst out, frustrated. “You keep asking questions without any answers!” she fumed.

“Oh, they have answers,” Arinna assured her. “You’re just afraid of the answers. So am I. So is everyone else, for that matter.” Arinna picked up the pitcher of hot tea and poured it out into two mugs. She handed one to Lexi and sipped slowly out of the other, looking at her friend over the rim. “I’m your friend. It’s my business to ask the hard questions, Lexi. I only do it because I care.” Slowly, she lowered her mug. “Do you want to go on?” she asked softly. Lexi shrugged.

“Yes. I guess. If you want to.” Arinna nodded slowly as she went on with her apology.

“All of us have something we’re willing to fight to the death for, Lexi. Something we believe in—something we believe is worth believing in. It’s part of what makes us human. Someday, Lexi, you will live, and fight, and die for something—and you’ll do it willingly, too. I can promise you that. It’s your destiny—it’s inevitable. You can’t change it, but you can decide what it is you will believe in. Put God out of your life, and you will find yourself trying to fill that void in your heart—you’ll catch yourself filling it with less desirable things. The catch, is to ask yourself what you’re willing to die for. Power? Money? Pleasure? Goods? Your home? Your possessions? Your friends? Your family? If any of that comes first—before God does—in your life, you’re no better than a pagan. You’re an idolater if you put any of those… material things before God.” Arinna looked down at her mug; for the first time her voice sounded unsure. “You may not like to hear this, Lexi, but I only say it because I care. I can’t soften this for you, without losing the message. It’s uncompromising, as hard as nails. You have to choose what you will fight for. He who will fight for nothing is no pacifist, but a coward indeed. You must choose—now—whom you will serve. No one can do it for you.” She took a deep breath. “That’s why I am here—in this camp—in this army—today, Lexi. I said to myself, ‘No more hesitation! I am going to commit—today!’ We both know that the road to Hell is paved with good intentions—if you even believe in Hell.” The evangelist’s voice was tinged with heavy bitterness. “I am willing to die for my Heavenly King. I decided that He was worth fighting for. I regret all the lives lost in this war, but there comes a time when one can no longer stand idly by. There comes a time when one must make a stand. I decided Whom I am going to serve. So what if I’m not perfect? Perfection isn’t possible for any human being. It doesn’t come until Heaven. It’s the times I worked—hard—that matter. I know my cause is worth dying for. Is yours?” Arinna looked up at Lexi with pleading eyes. The other woman was silent. She knew would have to think about it; Arinna knew it too. And while Lexi thought, Arinna would pray.

“I’ll think about it, ‘Rin. I… I promise.” Lexi said. Then, she left the tent, as evening fell over the Crusaders’ camp.

Evangelist

Let the past lie where it’s buried

By the gravestone, on the hill,

Wind wanders wild across the wastelands,

They say the spirit moves at will.

Each sad tear-fall lies there buried

In the garden, by the rill,

Every laughter a rose has planted,

They say the roses bloom there still.

Where one rose blights, sad and mournful

One by one, the petals fall,

In the garden by the rill-side

Back to the womb whence it was called.

Hold tight to what you’re given.

Hold tight to those you love.

These little blessings that we seek

Are our anchors, from above.

Ask again what you now live for

Question your heart’s desire

Many things we are attached to

Pass, straw-like, in the fire.

With the light, morning arises

A new dawn casts the night away

Each day builds on the one before it,

The future’s fragments are at play.

Congratulations go to those who actually made it to the end of this post! Oh, and please tell me… did you like the poem? 😉 It’s originally from my April/July Nanowrimo project Angels’ Reflections. Which, incidentally, I have new ideas for now. Cheers!

As always, thanks for reading and may God bless you and keep you in all your days!

“It’s a faith worth fighting for.” –Anonymous (okay, maybe not ANONYMOUS, but I still can’t remember who I’m quoting. X-P)

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